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Aug 14, 2008, 10:34 AM // 10:34
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: W/
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The Companion: Comic
The Companion Comic Story: Falcon was a normal man around 25 years old. He had a day off from his work. When he met a strange glowing circle who spoke to him, he was stubborn and touched it and landed on a strange land called Ascalon. When he met Alesia and her team, he began to travel to the Great Nothernwall and there he met his first good Friend called Joel. Now they need to find out why Falcon is here, 100 years in the past. Information: The Companion (Falcon) comic. Is based on the real story of Guild Wars. Ofcourse is not really based..because you don't play Falcon or Joel in Guild Wars. The Companion is based on the following genre’s: Action/Humor/Drama/Thriller/Romantic/Adventure Also.. the comic goes deeper in the characters like the relationship between Cynn and Mhenlo. Farrah Cappo and Little Thom. And how they evolved from a Soldiers to Legendary Heroes. When i began to make this comic.. i wasn't paying any attention to the grammar.. so there are some grammar problems. We will check on it in Chapter 2. Each country in Tyria (Ascalon,Northern Shiverpeaks, Kryta etc.) has about 100 strips. So 4 chapters for each country. It takes about 2 weeks to create a new chapter. So expect Chapter 2 in a week or two. Credits: Dennis (Playing Falcon) Joel (Playing Joel) Tfphoenix for the website. Contact: [email protected] (Anything related to the comic) [email protected] (Anything related to the Site) And to view/download the comic go to www.thecompanion.co.nr And have fun reading! |
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Aug 15, 2008, 09:58 AM // 09:58
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Forge Runner
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Blighty
Guild: The Legion of the Blue Blade
Profession: R/Mo
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Very professionally done, yes there are quite a few grammar/spelling problems but other than that very well done!
on the page where he first reached ascalon, did you mean him to say: "What.. the.. ****... am i?!" rather than "Where"? Didnt know whether it was an oversight or a comedic device. |
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Aug 15, 2008, 11:01 AM // 11:01
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Desert Nomad
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: in my GH
Guild: Limburgse Jagers [LJ]
Profession: W/
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Very cool flash comic. nicely done. but as distilledwill said: work on your grammar. Also: the small flash page is hard to read. you might wanna increase the size of the text.
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Aug 15, 2008, 11:49 AM // 11:49
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: W/
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Quote:
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I will work on it. Thanks. |
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Aug 19, 2008, 09:01 AM // 09:01
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: W/
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Update 19-08-08
_____________________________________ News: TheCompanionComic changed from host, and added a more friendlier interface. Also we got some special news at the end. The Site is updated, and has a new interface, the interface is as follow: Home: (Go to the Main Page from the website) About: (You can read the story, about the comic here) Archives: (Download/View here the old chapters) Extra: (Bonus material, and more comics!) Listen: (A Mediaplayer, it plays the music from the chapters) Contact: (You need to contact us? Got a Question? Be here) Shoutbox: (Do you have something to say ? Or do you want to chat with the team, come to the Shoutbox) Shoutbox can be found under the "Contact" Button _______________________________________________ Special News: Chapter 2 is going to be released this Thursday. _____________________________________ - TheCompanionComic Team |
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Aug 19, 2008, 09:22 AM // 09:22
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: W/
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Please let us know what you think about this comic, and do you have a few sugestions to make this comic better please tell us^^.
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Aug 22, 2008, 10:50 PM // 22:50
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: W/
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Sorry for the delay. We had to implant a new system on the website and we had some Host problems.
But i got good news: Chapter 2 is live! Watch it now on www.thecompanion.co.nr! |
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Aug 23, 2008, 09:50 AM // 09:50
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Site Contributor
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: UK/norway
Guild: Order Of The Etherbloom Crown [ZEN]
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It's really very well done. The layout is nice, it looks very proffessional...
but I think you really need to work on your grammar. It kind of kills it for me. Otherwise I would love to see more. |
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Aug 23, 2008, 05:52 PM // 17:52
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Pre-Searing Cadet
Join Date: Aug 2008
Profession: W/
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I understand, we will take care of it.
And sorry we are not born Englishman's or Americans. |
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